1. Notes

Editing Notes

Word changes

Raudi Ridge - Reth Ringrose

Raudi River - River Cros

Raudi Crossing - Cros Kulleth

Contollo/Kiendshiertinse - Dúl Farnom

Huella - Ennishcrone

Prose words:

Lay - Area, the lay of 

Fell - evil, or ancient and mysterious

Fey - Supernatural, peculiar

Lore - Knowledge

Seldom - rarely

Gainsay - say something that is a truism for your own gain

Pardon - Excuse me

Unquiet - Chaotic

Merrily - Happily

O - o'

Besotted - infatuated, obsessed with feelings

Hence-forth - from this point on

Amped - Exited

Other:

Boreen - Narrow road

Sleveen - A cunning person


Devices:

Show not tell

Figurative language

Dramatic Irony



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